In this blog I will discuss the end of
overeating by David A. Kessler, MD, tells us about how he discover the real
cause of overeating, because it has become major problem for millions of people. Dr. David says that habit
of over eating may be taking place in our brain, because brain is a main center
that has power to control our behavior. Dr. David states that “Palatability is
largely based on how food engages the full range of our senses” (12). He’s
point is that Palatable foods which are contain some rich combination of sugar,
fat, and salt basically these ingredients trapped our brain to eat food, whether hungry or not. This article gives us new knowledge about how “ Food had become more readily available in the 1970s and 1980s” (Kessler 6).In
other words Kessler believes increasing fast food chain restaurants way of food
design such as flavor, texture, and appearance that make the people to desire
eat more and more even when they are full. Concentrated animal feeding
operations (CAFO) systems basically promoted by the fast food chain
restaurants, because of cheap meat, milk, dairy, and eggs products. People who
are try to rid their bodies the burden of over weight and spend money for short
term weight loss process. I believe instead of this, increases your willpower,
and control your mind then you can rid from obesity and many other health
problems.
The blog gives the main idea of the essay directly from the start, and that is very useful to the reader. However it lacks clarity, the blog is hard to read due to the many unconnected sentences. For example "People who are try to rid their bodies the burden of overweight and spend money for short term weight loss process". This particular line is a bit hard to read because the sentence is not connected, although I do understand that you are trying to address that people who are overweight try quick ineffective diet programs. You may want to try the following; those whom are suffering from overweight or obesity spend money on ineffective short term weight loss programs. Overall the blog has the information that is needed, but you should try to re- read your work in order for it to be more comprehensible.
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